Mr. Santarelli's Thoughts

Great work class on your improved efforts in your blog posts.  I am proud of the progress you are making in your writing. Many of you have used the feedback I gave you from the last post and it is great to see how that has helped you. There is still much to work on including; topic sentences and concluding sentences, organizing our ideas, and elaborating on what we want to say. Oh, and I must not forget that we should ALL take some time to review our work for spelling, grammar and sentence fluency. An extra 5 or 10 minutes could be your ticket to a level 3 or 4!